truth, drafts2

below, in bold, is my preferred draft of ‘truth’; the first piece follows in regular print

truth

with enough wine in her, ‘I don’t love you enough to do that’

truth,
I need, needed,
the idea, a moment of, ‘enough’
never an act, never

the truth
you spoke tonite
saved me from striving to make
spaces
enough

needs
Closes

life
flees

Enough

my first truth:

truth

with enough wine in her, ‘I don’t love you enough to do that’

truth, I need , I needed, the idea, the moment of, ‘enough’
never an act, never

the truth you spoke tonite
saved me from striving to make
spaces
enough

needs
Closes

life
flees

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